Writing for your website when you're not a writer
You already know how to write your website. You do it every day on the phone, when a customer asks what you do, how it works and what it costs, and you explain it in plain words. Good website text is that same explanation, written down and tidied up. You do not need a writer's vocabulary; you need to say it the way you would say it to a customer, then cut what is not needed. Here is a simple method that works for owners who would rather fix a furnace or frost a cake than write.
Why owners freeze, and why it does not matter
Most owners sit down to write and suddenly sound like a brochure: "We are committed to providing exceptional service to our valued clients." Nobody talks like that, and customers skim right past it. The problem is not a lack of writing skill. It is the feeling that a website needs "website language".
It does not. The best small-business sites read like the owner talking. That is good news, because talking is something you already do well.
The method: say it, record it, trim it
This works for any page, from the home page to a single service.
- Pick one page and the one question it answers. For a service page: "What happens when I hire you for this?" For the about page: "Who are you and why should I trust you?"
- Imagine a customer on the phone asking that question. A real one, if you can: the retired couple with the leaking roof, the young mom who needs a birthday cake by Saturday.
- Answer out loud and record it. Use the voice memo app on your phone. Talk for two or three minutes, as if they were listening. Do not stop to fix things.
- Turn the recording into text. Most phones can transcribe a voice memo, or you can use the dictation button on your phone's keyboard and talk straight into a note. You can also just play it back and type.
- Trim it. Cut the "um"s, the repeats and the side stories. Keep the facts, the examples and the phrases that sound like you.
- Read it aloud once more. Anything you stumble over, rewrite in the words you would actually say.
What you end up with will be clearer and warmer than anything you would have written from scratch at a desk.
Short sentences, plain words
When you tidy up your text, a few rules make it easier to read, especially on a phone:
- One idea per sentence. If a sentence has three "and"s, it is probably three sentences.
- Short paragraphs, two to four sentences. On a phone a long paragraph looks like a wall.
- Everyday words. "Fix" instead of "remediate". "Start" instead of "commence". "Price" instead of "investment".
- "You" and "we". "We come to your house, look at the problem and give you a written price before we start." That is how you talk; write it that way.
- Real numbers and names. "We've done about 40 kitchens in Hamilton County" says more than "extensive experience". Only write numbers that are true.
Questions to answer on each page
If you are stuck on what to say, answer the questions customers really ask. Keep a notepad by the phone for a week and write down every question you hear. Most of them belong on your site. For most service pages, the list starts with:
- What exactly do you do, and what do you not do?
- How does it work, step by step?
- How long does it take?
- What does it cost, or what does the price depend on?
- What do I need to do before you come?
- What if something goes wrong?
Each answer can be a short paragraph with a plain heading above it. How to write service pages that answer customer questions goes deeper on that page in particular.
Reuse what you already have
You probably have more writing than you think:
- Emails to customers where you explained a job well.
- Quotes and estimates, which often describe your work step by step.
- Reviews, where customers say in their words what they valued. Those words are gold for your own text, since they show what people notice.
- Your old website, if parts of it still sound right.
- Your Google Business Profile description and social media posts.
Copy the good bits into one document and shape them into pages.
Using AI tools, carefully
AI writing tools can turn rough notes into tidy paragraphs. They can help, but they tend to produce exactly the polished, empty brochure voice you were trying to avoid, and they sometimes invent facts. If you use one, feed it your own recorded answers, not a blank request, and then check every sentence. Checking AI-written website text before it goes live covers what to look for.
Getting a second pair of eyes
Before anything goes live, ask one person who is not in your trade to read the page on their phone. Ask them only two things: what was unclear, and what did they still want to know. Fix those, and leave the rest alone. Do not try to make it perfect; make it clear.
What to do this week
- Choose your home page or your most important service page.
- Write down the one question it answers.
- Record yourself answering it for two or three minutes, as if to a customer.
- Turn the recording into text and trim it into short paragraphs.
- Ask someone outside your trade to read it on their phone and tell you what was unclear.
If the idea of rewriting your whole site still feels like too much, you can see your site rebuilt first from the text you already have, and then change any line in your own words.