Writing town pages without copying the same page
A town page is worth writing only when you can say something on it that is true about that town and not about the next one. Pages that swap "Springfield" for "Shelbyville" and keep every other word the same help nobody: customers can tell, and Google tends to treat them as copies. The good news is that most local businesses know far more about the places they work than they put on their site. This guide is about getting that knowledge onto the page.
When a business needs location pages at all
Many small businesses do fine with one service area page that lists the towns they cover. You only need separate pages for towns when at least one of these is true:
- You have a real office, shop or yard in more than one town.
- A town is big enough, or far enough from your base, that people there wonder whether you really come out.
- You do noticeably different work in different places: lake houses in one town, older brick homes in another, new subdivisions in a third.
- You have done enough jobs in a town to show photos and talk about them.
If none of those apply, a single, well-written page about where you work is the better choice. Service area page: telling customers where you work covers how to write that one.
Why copied town pages backfire
The habit started years ago, when some marketers built dozens of near-identical pages hoping each would catch a town's searches. Google has said plainly for a long time that it does not want pages made mainly to catch searches with little real content behind them. A set of copies like that can make the whole site look less trustworthy.
There is a simpler problem too. A homeowner in a town you serve reads the page and finds nothing about their town except its name in the heading. That reads as a form letter. It does not convince anyone that you know the area.
Local landing pages: when town pages help and hurt goes into the search side in more depth. This guide is about the writing.
What makes a town page genuinely about that town
Start by writing down, for each town, what you know from actually working there. Most owners are surprised how much comes out once they try. Here are the kinds of details that belong on a town page.
The housing or buildings you see there
"Most homes we work on in Oak Park were built before 1940, with plaster walls and original wiring" tells an Oak Park homeowner you have been inside houses like theirs. A cleaning company might say a town is mostly condos with strict building rules about service hours. A landscaper might mention clay soil, hills or a homeowners association that requires approval for front-yard changes.
Local rules and paperwork
Permit offices differ from town to town. If one town requires a permit for a fence over a certain height, or has its own inspection process, say so in plain words and say you handle it. Keep it general enough to stay true, and check it every year or so.
How you get there and when
"We are based twenty minutes away in Elgin and run in St. Charles most weekdays" is honest and useful. If there is a trip charge for a farther town, say how it works.
Jobs you have done there
A short description of two or three real jobs, with your own photos: "Replaced a sagging cedar fence along a corner lot near the high school", "Cleaned and sealed a brick patio that had not been touched in years". No names or addresses unless the customer agreed. These are the strongest lines on the page, because no one can copy them.
What people in that town usually ask
Write down the questions you actually hear from that town. A beach town asks about salt air and rust. A farm town asks whether you come out to rural roads. A town with old trees asks about roots in sewer lines.
A simple outline for each town page
- A heading with the service and the town: "Tree trimming and removal in Westfield".
- Two sentences confirming you work there and how often.
- A section on the homes, yards or buildings in that town and what that means for the work.
- Two or three real jobs from that town, with photos.
- Local notes: permits, access, parking, seasons.
- Questions people in that town ask, answered briefly.
- Your phone number and a contact button.
Keep the parts that are truly the same everywhere, like your licensing and how booking works, short, and link to the pages that explain them in full. That way each town page is mostly about the town.
How many town pages to write
Fewer than you think. Start with the two or three towns where you do the most work or where you most want more of it. Write those well. Add another only when you have real jobs, photos and details for it.
A site with five strong town pages and a clear service area list is in better shape than one with forty thin ones. If you already have dozens of copied pages, you do not have to delete them all at once. Rewrite the ones for your best towns, fold the rest into the service area page, and make sure each old address forwards to the page that replaced it so nobody hits an error. Old page addresses: why forwarding them matters explains how that forwarding works.
Mistakes to avoid
- Listing nearby streets or landmarks just to fill space. A list of parks proves nothing about your work. Mention a landmark only when it helps someone understand where you are or where you have worked.
- Claiming an office you do not have. If you serve a town from your base elsewhere, say so. Pretending to have a local address can get your business listing removed on Google and erodes trust.
- Inventing reviews or jobs. If you have not worked in a town yet, do not make up a story about one.
- Using a different phone number per town unless you really have separate lines. Customers who see several numbers wonder which one is real.
What to do this week
- List every town you serve and mark the two or three where you do the most work.
- For each of those, write five things you know about working there: homes, soil, rules, distance, typical requests.
- Find your best photos from jobs in each town.
- Look at your current town pages side by side. Any two that read the same apart from the name should be rewritten or merged.
- Write one town page using the outline above and read it as a resident would.
If your current site has a stack of copied town pages and you want a cleaner starting point, you can see your site rebuilt first, with old page addresses kept working, and then fill in the local details yourself.